[字]在这严寒的夜里写一首牛B的短诗——《雪》

严家→冬冬

<BLOCKQUOTE><STRONG>引用</STRONG>： <HR>原文由 <B>锈铁</B> 发表于 <I>2006-1-5 0:40:47</I> :<BR><>我为您的欣赏能力喝彩</P><>....同时</P><>为您的鉴赏能力遗憾</P><HR></BLOCKQUOTE>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 我无法鉴别

锈铁

...这就是我遗憾的原因

严家→冬冬

是我低估了你的才华&nbsp;

徘徊

<><IMG src="http://www.400.com.cn/images/Emotions/59.gif">锈铁</P><>&nbsp;</P><>他总是那么有才华</P>

greenwater

<BLOCKQUOTE>:<BR><FONT size=5>&nbsp;<SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">简单的世界</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun">, </SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">复杂的人</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun">, </SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">干凈的世界</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun">, </SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">骯脏的人</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun">, </SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">真实的世界</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun">, </SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">虚伪的人</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun">. <SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">人会说话</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">, </SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">世界却不会用人的语言去辩驳</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">.</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">于是</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">, </SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">它背负着人馈赠的罪孽</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">, </SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">不堪重负</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">, </SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">它唯一能做的就是</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">-----</SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">用这雪</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">, </SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">暂时地遮羞</SPAN></SPAN></FONT></BLOCKQUOTE>

greenwater

<BLOCKQUOTE><STRONG>引用</STRONG>：<HR>原文由 <B>无悔</B> 发表于 <I>2006-1-5 9:55:22</I> :<BR>雪拯救了一些人冬天的空虚 <><>　　……让他们写出的诗歌也有寒意</P><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">人的空虛</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體">,</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun"> </SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">无</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">法</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt">拯救</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt">,</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt"> </SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt">雪也只能悲哀地看着</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt">, </SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt">尽管它也想将那空虚填满</SPAN>

严家→冬冬

<BLOCKQUOTE><STRONG>引用</STRONG>： <HR>原文由 <B>锈铁</B> 发表于 <I>2006-1-4 21:27:54</I> :<BR><>香港城的废墟上</P><>一切阴暗的角落都被漂白了</P><>所有肮脏的人们</P><>都被洗涤</P><>白头白脑</P><>于是</P><>冬天便一片祥和</P><>我看到的世界</P><>就这样</P><>既虚伪</P><P>又纯洁</P><HR></BLOCKQUOTE>是你写的么

锈铁

<>不是</P><>...还有问题吗？</P>

greenwater

<SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">意料之中</SPAN>

严家→冬冬

<>没有问题&nbsp;&nbsp; </P><>写的很不错</P>